1) The pitch
2) A reflection on the feedback you received from your last pitch.
From the last pith I
did, I received mostly positive feedback. All of the feedback I received talked
about how well I used hand gestures and my eye contact. They said that it really
shows that I am trying to connect with my audience and really engage in
communication. I think the advice I enjoyed the most was to have more confidence
which comes with practice. I do not think any of the advice was wrong. I really
enjoyed my feedback.
3) What did you change, based on the feedback?
Based on my
feedback, I made sure to practice my pitch a couple more times before I
recorded it. I found that with more practice, I was more comfortable and confident
speaking about my product. I made sure that I maintained my eye contact and hand
gestures. I also updated my script a little bit just to improve the information
I am trying to communicate to the audience.
Hey there Avery,
ReplyDeleteFirst off I would like to say that I never realized how similar our goals for our business idea are! I appreciate the desire you have to make something so helpful to the community. With regards to your pitch, I think it was animated and entertaining! I love the concrete explanation you gave. Keep it up!
Hey Avery,
ReplyDeleteI remember your last elevator pitch and it was very good! Really awesome hand gestures and eye contact! You definitely continued to do so, if not better than last time. I definitely could tell you practiced a little more, great job!